We took a stand and I am just 2nd guessing myself, improve pg. 9

I’ve been on BBC (BabyCenter) years, mostly lurking and sporadically publishing, but I made a new take into account this because my DH (dear spouse) understands my other screen title and where We post. I’m going to use to not get this to a novel, but i simply don’t even understand how to start. There is certainly therefore much back ground and information, but i am going to do my better to summarize.